Monday, April 30, 2012

9th Grade Writing Reflection Rough Draft


Justin Rogstad
Dr. deGravelles
Block 4
4/29/12

9th Grade Writing Reflection Rough Draft

                In my ninth grade year I have written many papers and essays. I have written more essays this year, than I have in all my other years of school put together. I believe it’s time for me to really sit down and reflect on my past writings this year.
                The first paper I wrote this year was “Publisher’s Tee”, and I must say I wasn’t a very strong writer at the beginning of the year. I was missing little mistakes that I shouldn’t have. Little errors like missing an apostrophe when showing possession and missing a question mark when the sentence was a question. Those small mistakes made me wonder why I missed those. The next paper I wrote was the “Cole Kennedy” which was a profile assignment on a person or place. This essay was significantly stronger than my first paper but I was still not very strong in my writing. I made fewer mistakes but still made careless mistakes like sentence fragments. One thing in common with my first two papers was the length. I remember struggling with length and having writer’s block often.
                Now in my third paper this year, I wrote a paper called “Addressee Unknown”. For this assignment we wrote a literary analysis on a short story of our choice. When reviewing my paper I noticed that this paper is where I started seeing my strength in my writing show up. I made fewer mistakes than ever, and I began to miss things that were not little careless mistakes; they were more reasonable mistakes than before. The length of my writing increased dramatically. This was the longest paper I had written in my entire school career so far. That is until I wrote my fourth paper, “A Nuclear North”. This assignment was to cover a global issue that is affecting the earth and to analyze it. This paper was almost five and a half pages. I thought this was unbelievable when I was writing this. Overall this paper showed my strength in writing. I only messed up on one thing in this entire paper basically, and that was the citations. I guess I just forgot how to cite.
                For the most part I agree with the grades I have gotten on my papers. The feedback this year has been really helpful and is one of the main reason my writing has progressed this year. I knew that my stronger aspects of writing were mechanics, organization, and word choice. Those aspects were shown in my writing this year. I however knew that support and sentence structure were lacking quite a bit. I will have to practice and work on those aspects to make my writing great. I now know that when I focus on my writing that I should look more closely at the aspects I am lacking in and pay less attention to what I am good at.
My writing has been decent throughout the year. What I believe will help my writing become better than decent make revisions more, and I should read my writing more carefully to try to locate all my mistakes so I can make my writing the best it can be. The main things I should work on is citations and just be careful of careless mistakes. If I find remember to make these adjustments, my writing will be at its highest potential for this year.
                 Next year in English II, I already know that writing will be tougher on me. I decided to make some goals for the future. I plan to practice writing with as much support and sentence structure I can to try to focus my skills to the lacking aspects of my writing. Before I write each of my papers next year I will be sure to review notes I have gotten this year, like “The Traits of Good Writing”. Another goal I may carry out is I might try to rewrite some of the papers I wrote this year and have people proof read and give me feedback. This way I can strengthen my writing skills and get a feel for good writing.
                My writing this year has been a beneficial experience that I will keep with me for the rest of my writing career. I hope that all this goal setting and planning will pay off in the long run. I also hope everyone else got as much out of this year as I have.
                 

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