Global Issues Project
My outside reading for this week was spent on my project since I thought my paper needed some work. What I realized was for what I had, I had very few quotes put in there. I was worried that my paper wasn't strong enough without more quotes, so I spent time working on that. For the most part I thought I Found a good amount of quotes, and it did strengthen my writing.
The other thing I worked on was the length of my paper. It was a little too short for my taste. I decided that i should elaborated and give more detail in my body paragraphs. I felt they were lacking and it also gave my paper some length. I also increased the size and quality of my conclusion and I feel it is one of my strongest parts of my paper.
Global issues project
1/29/12-2/5/12
Friday 30mins
Saturday 50mins
Sunday 70mins
total 150mins
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